Letting Go…

Like a scent left lingering on,

A waft of a familiar bond,

I held on to it for all this while,

Hoping it will conjure up Ur smile…

Hanging on to the threadbare hope,

I have been walking the tight rope,

Hoping u were standing somewhere,

To catch me if I managed to fall But no,

You were gone.

It was my fantasy,

and my fault,

I’ve fallen and gotten right up,

Now I’ve learnt to stand tall…

4 comments for “Letting Go…

  1. February 19, 2009 at 1:28 pm

    🙂 all of 6’1-6’2 😛

  2. Joshua
    February 19, 2009 at 4:50 pm

    Very nice.

    Who but?

  3. April 26, 2009 at 11:00 am

    Nice one! 🙂 I wrote one on a similar theme.

    Just Break it
    ——————–

    Just the teasing tips of the leaves shimmering so well, visible
    Outside my window makes my mind’s eye
    Want to trace its resting branches all the way
    To the trunk further down to the root; ’tis futile
    I know those will be replaced leaves tomorrow like
    The lesson I tried to teach you–
    To love is to lose, to be attached is to unglue
    To eternalize a bond is to
    Break it.

    Seen here: http://onwritingwell.net/?p=42

    I’m the bsandeep from twitter (http://twitter.com/bsandeep)

  4. April 26, 2009 at 11:00 am

    Nice one!

    I wrote one on a similar theme.

    Just Break it
    ——————–

    Just the teasing tips of the leaves shimmering so well, visible
    Outside my window makes my mind’s eye
    Want to trace its resting branches all the way
    To the trunk further down to the root; ’tis futile
    I know those will be replaced leaves tomorrow like
    The lesson I tried to teach you–
    To love is to lose, to be attached is to unglue
    To eternalize a bond is to
    Break it.

    Seen here: http://onwritingwell.net/?p=42

    I’m the bsandeep from twitter (http://twitter.com/bsandeep)

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